That was great!
I really like the humor in it, as well as your unique style, but i still had a few problems with it. the walk cycles were horrible, you really need to work on them, you did the noob type walk cycles where the feet just sway back and forth, as apposed to one lifting up and going ahead while the other went back. also, i think it should have been a little more fast paced at the beginning before the guy got hit in the head. it would add more of a sense of safety before the chaos started. Overall good job there.